Blog Post 4/15/2011

Throughout reading the final bowling essay it really got me thinking about how I am going to put together an entire essay on my ethnography site. By using the different subtitles I thought it really spaced out the essay but in an easy to read fashion. I thought it was also interesting to see how adding more descriptions it truly does make the essay look better. I thought the first paragraph was really well written in the way that it gave the background information on the sport and how many people do it and what the reader should expect while reading it. I also thought that the very creative subtitles was a very good idea and that I need to think of ones that will make the reader want to sit down and read an essay that is 17 pages long.